The proposal could have been a nice addition to a more developed project, a promenade as part of the experience. But the proposal does not respond to the brief put forward.
A nicely executed design and presentation. In my opinion however, the question of the content of an Athaneum has not been tackled, and the walkeable sculpture itself offers little content, only experience. You offer many explanations, but you should concentrate with these more on how you have reacted to the brief, namely the Athaneum.
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Good landscape strategy. Needs anchor programs.
The proposal could have been a nice addition to a more developed project, a promenade as part of the experience. But the proposal does not respond to the brief put forward.
A nicely executed design and presentation. In my opinion however, the question of the content of an Athaneum has not been tackled, and the walkeable sculpture itself offers little content, only experience. You offer many explanations, but you should concentrate with these more on how you have reacted to the brief, namely the Athaneum.