Misty.Hills

The series is well thought out and I like the idea of bringing in a model, but time needs to be spent on the clothing and style of the model to bring the idea of nature and history into a more coherent story

There could be more consideration for the positioning of the human element - being on the edge of frame for most felt a bit repetitive. There are some tonal and compositional issues, have a look at the 'rule of thirds' , particularly with landscape it will help to draw the viewer around the image as well as focus on the main area of interest and what you are communicating. There were good choices made with the locations, and time of day will make a big difference here also as you can lose information in deep shadows and light sky. The series could have had a tighter focus on just the ruin structure - the view over the town didn't add anything to the theme