The presentation would have benefited from a few more choice cross-sections or renderings of pedestrian views. Considering the exciting interplay of curve and line along the exterior shell and circulation of the building, it was not obvious enough the first time I scanned over the design.
The dedicated section on the design process added meaningful contest but could have been greatly abbreviated to make space for more visuals dedicated to product of that process.
Despite the planform, I'm left strongly wanting to know what the interior of the building looks like and whether it harmonizes with the exterior.
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The presentation would have benefited from a few more choice cross-sections or renderings of pedestrian views. Considering the exciting interplay of curve and line along the exterior shell and circulation of the building, it was not obvious enough the first time I scanned over the design. The dedicated section on the design process added meaningful contest but could have been greatly abbreviated to make space for more visuals dedicated to product of that process. Despite the planform, I'm left strongly wanting to know what the interior of the building looks like and whether it harmonizes with the exterior.
The design concept connection to child behavior is extremely thoughtful, however it feels unresolved in the final presentation.
Excellent idea