Landscape

An addition of great ideas that would benefit from becoming one whole. A more synthetic approach would make the project to more than the sum of its parts, especially given the presentation skills.

Exccelent proposal. Strong and Unique concept. Very well researched and proposed solutions. Totally solved project. A real biophilic design integrated into the vertical realm

Great concept and presentation that is flexible and dynamic.

A light corridor creates a meditative atmosphere while walking. Light and shadow arise the association of memory and water landscape contains the poetry of meditation. Additionally, the meditative space and site structure are symbolized by common history and construction of ‘ruins + memory’ of the city wall, which illustrates the dialogue between history and contemporary.

I understand the idea of the building as a road or a path, as a metaphor of moving forward, but the project doesn't translate it quite clear. Lacks program and spatial diversity.

Amazing !!

Amazing

I really enjoy the use of greenspace in conjunction with natural lighting that is present throughout. It's unique concept and I think that is a great way to attract more folks to soccer.

El proyecto construye una sola idea y un solo uso central, eso constituye su debilidad e imposibilita un uso más heterogéneo en el tiempo. La mirada lineal y direccionada de consumir la ladera a través de un “Museo” nos aleja de una vivencia doméstica, incierta, débil y ordinaria en la que se debe entender el quehacer cotidiano de los habitantes de Pamplona y de la ciudad de Lima Este proyecto no incita al encuentro, discusión o intercambios de saberes o experiencias, solo nos permite escuchar una sola voz (la del museo)

- The main idea of the 420 steps (for the months that the two populations have been separated) does not have enough force to generate a project with clear intentions that proposes the expected changes. It remains in a symbolic phase that does not contribute to the definition of the project. - There is no clear relationship between the proposed stairs and the ramps. This relationship is neither shown nor investigated in the design, they seem like two separated proposals. It would be interesting to rethink this relationship, and in turn with the natural topography, delimitation, and permeability of the edges of the land during the insertion of the project in the place. All this would help to achieve a better relationship with the landscape itself. - A preliminary study is developed on transport, infrastructure, and green areas, however, the relationship with decision-making is not read in the proposal. - The idea of a main museum use does not contribute to everyday use. It is not an activity that generates interaction between the two populations. It is rather an individual activity rather than a collective one. It would have been interesting to address the use from goods and product exchange activities that the population may have and that occur daily, such as the market routine and the sale of food products. - It would be advisable to think of vegetation that provides shade and improves the thermal sensation since the place is quite rough. Palm trees do not help in this endeavor.

Very wonderful!

The inspirations gained from Geoffrey Bawa's projects should be interpreted in your own way and a concept should be developed, else it is just like recreating his projects. The various elements can be utilised in a contemporary context Thus creating a balance between traditional and contemporary design.

Great job, I liked it 👍🏻👍🏻

Wow

Nice work 👍🏻

Nice work Suzanne!! Very cool!

A brave idea to open up the central rotunda atrium and turn into an outdoor plaza. The urban spatial type is preserved and transformed to a more relaxing, entertaining and interactive place.

very thoughtful, but also very reminiscent of several already existing towers. the idea of having trees growing in the facade makes no sense due to the deep roots trees need

The project seems approached from a stylistic and advertising interest criteria.. There is more concern for interior design than for landscape impact. The priorities should be reviewed.

The concept is promising. In the development of the project the sections show the potential of the design in termo of tectonic integration and symbiosis with the context. However, the design is not developed to such a level as to allow an adequate understanding of the tectonic and functional implications of the concept.

Well-concerted and concentrated actions. The proposed alignment produces a didactic experience, not just a tourist one.Typologically correct. Creatively developed program. good dimensioning of spaces. No stylistic abuse. It relates well to the landscape.

Despite the simplicity and linearity of the project, the overall result is interesting. The graphic quality of the presentation is also good. Its feasibility and grounded approach are a positive asset which makes the work convincing.

This rationalist-style "ladder hammer" is too formalistic.. not apropriate for such environment. the proposal is naive.

The concept is interesting and overall effective. However the presentation, especially the development and the 3D simulation do not have an equally convincing graphic quality.

Amazing project Anna! Congratulations!